If you'd put all this in your original article it would have appeared less bias. Still disagree with the statement "Yao was arguably one of the most skillful and reliable low-post scorers of all time in the NBA". There are many players in different positions I'd rather give the ball to in the low post.
Also don't think he is deserving of a place in the hall of fame. He was voted in by the international committee essentially based on his achievements as a ambassador/cash cow for the NBA. While this should be recognised, I don't feel it is appropriate to have him in the hall of fame, a celebration of the greatest players to play the game.
The reason I compare him to Shaq is because you have described Yao as the best in the league, then use Shaq's stats to prove this, forgetting to mention that in 2005 Shaq actually won the championship. Also, you've taken Yao's stats from 2006/7 and Shaq's from 2005/6.
I don't have anything against Yao as a player, just don't think he deserves to be in the hall of fame or the subject of bias articles.